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Jeff Reed

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Jeff Reed

  • Chiastic Poetry
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Eye of the Whale

June 18, 2018 Jeff Reed
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Isn’t it a grace that the faces

of the flailing plankton can’t be seen

by the Baleen whales driven by their strong tails

swallowing whole swarms clean for dinner?

 

I swear if their terror could be detected

it might be some whales voluntarily select to

forego the whole meal out of a feeling of genuine empathy.

 

And then where would they be?

Kindness literally starving them to death

beneath a suddenly calmer compassionate sea.

 

Please don’t mention this to me.

I refuse to think about the six-pack rings

of unsnipped plastic that I just threw away,

or the other day how I left my towel

 

in a crumple on a hotel bathroom floor just to get a couple more,

not to mention the man I passed an hour before

without so much as a friendly glance,

 

hurrying home as I was  to my hoard, change my pants,

pay the piper for the chance to get this whale off my chest,

my reward for my work, here’s a bottle of wine

and a shrimp appetizer and some peppy TV time.


Eye of the Whale continues my series of poems inspired by various iconic arches with National Arches Monument in Moab, Utah.  Each poem explores some dimension of human becoming, just as each arch is formed by the long action of wind and water on the sandstone.  This poem explores the idea that we blithely continue in many of our actions because we do not take the time to see possible long term consequences of things that are apparently innocuous.  This poem was written primarily with the ear, playing with rhythms over a steady beat.  Read it out loud and see how the rhythms play on your tongue.  Listen to my recording below and you'll hear how I was hearing them play out. 

Photo credit: unknown.

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